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2009年6月英语六级作文范文及评析(昂立翁晓燕)

作者:佚名    文章来源:互联网    点击数:    更新时间:2009/8/21

09年6月2日的六级作文题是:
1有人认为名字很重要
2也有人认为无关紧要,
3我认为
By 翁晓燕 Helen

点评:如果说四级的作文题目有点偏的话,这篇作文的内容几乎就游离在所有的预料之外了,不知道四六级考试委员会出题的时候是不是旨在不让任何人预测到呢(just kidding),但是撇开话题不说,模式还是经典的四六级议论文格式,属于议论文中的争议型,典型的一些人认为……另一些人认为……我认为……。昂立的课堂上已经同学员们清晰讲解过多次这样的作文模式,也反复经过操练,只要考生的段落内容分配无误,相信加以一些基本的文字功底应该不成问题,下面是及格范文供大家参考。

及格版范文:
On the importance of a name
 Some people think that a name is very important. Most parents would look into the dictionary, search on the internet, or even go to some fortune-tellers for great names for their children. They believe that a name would affect one’s future events such as marriage, career or even life span. That’s why some people, after they grow up and find their own names not to their own taste, would change their names.
 However, others disagree. They are saying that a name is just made as a way of calling a person. And one’s fate is decided by his/her own efforts. They believe that parents shouldn’t pay too much attention or money on naming their children. What’s important is that they should give them the right education to make sure they grow up to be nice people.
 As for me, I have to say I agree with the latter more. I mean surely a beautiful name would be wonderful itself, but it doesn’t make your life better. We should make our life better by our efforts but not names.

及格版范文特点是表达能力比较有限,只能通过简单的词汇和句式去达到题目要求的文章大意,且观点较为笼统,篇幅也勉强符合要求,下面是优秀版范文参考,相比之下,功底相对深厚,词汇丰富,句式结构出彩,观点表达到位。

优秀版范文:
On the importance of a name
 Interestingly, recently the importance of a name has been brought into hot discussion.
 Some people strongly believe that a name is responsible for a person’s fate, that’s why they would take all the trouble to try various ways to find wonderful names for their children, expecting the names would work magic for a glorious future. According to these people, a child may grow up happy, smart, attractive, elegant or successful due to their names.
 Despite that, others have voiced a different opinion that a name is relatively insignificant comparing to the efforts a person makes to realize his/her future dream as a person’s fate is dominantly decided by a person himself/herself instead of the name he/she was given at his/her birth. Opportunities may count; and a person’s own efforts and decisions definitely count; but a name simply functions as the way of the person being called by others, which doesn’t work to change one’s life.
 As far as I am concerned, a beautiful name certainly is one of the factors to make a great first impression. However, it’s not so important and powerful as to decide a person’s future. To grab the fate, we need intelligence, honesty, sincerity and efforts more than a name.

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