一套卷：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Help others and you will be helped when you are in need” You can cite example to illustrate your views. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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The rapid development of today's society has aroused a heated discussion as to whether we should help others in the society. Views on the topic vary greatly among people from different walks of life, among which there goes a well-known saying: "Help others and you will be helped when you are in need", suggesting that we should try to help others kindly.
I totally agree with this saying for the reasons presented below. First, it is good for the whole society because if everyone in the society can give a hand to each other, it is more likely that the society will become more peaceful. Second, it is good for the person himself / herself. For example, if a person tries to help others when they have trouble, when he needs help, he can get help from other people. So, I totally agree with this saying.
From my perspective, it is crucial that modern education should encourage people to support each other. Also it is crucial that people should understand the meaning and value of helping each other. Only in this way can they build a harmonious society.
解析
文体：本次的作文是大家所熟悉的“论说文”，需要考生去评价一个观点并给出自己的理由。
审题：客观来说论说文，对观点的评价正反两面皆可，但这里并不建议从反面写，因为给出的观点“Help others and you will be helped when you are in need”本身是非常正能量的，因此如果非要从反面着手，难度就比较大，很难做到自圆其说。
结构：论说文的结构是非常清晰的。在沪江网校的四六级写作课中已经提得非常明确了“龙头凤尾，中间结构清晰”，在开头一段，亮出观点，引入主题；在中间结构部分，牢记“清晰”二字，利用举例丰富所要论说的观点，善于使用关系词理清逻辑结构关系，做到层次分明。在收尾部分，则要做到深化主旨，再次强调观点的正确性，可以说就是非常棒了。
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