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作者:周湘    文章来源:新东方    点击数:    更新时间:2009/10/6

  所有考研班的同学,这是五年的小作文题目和参考范文,我把里面好的不好的内容都简单做了分析,并且也结合了我上课讲的内容,请同学们看的时候多结合自己的情况和水平来思考造句,不要盲目背诵,还是要说那句话——作文是想出来的,不是背出来的!

  祝大家梦想成真,前方的路你并不孤独,因为有我,有你,还有他; 虽然前方的路很黑很长,但漫长的黑夜同样给了我们安静的思考和冒险的精神,大家努力!

2009年考研小作文

51.Restrictions on the use of plastic bags have not been so successful in some regions. “White pollution ”is still going on. Write a letter to the editor(s) of your local newspaper to
1)give your opinions briefly and
2) make two or three suggestions

You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead. You do not need to write the address

参考范文

Dear Sir,

Nowadays,there exists an increasingly serious environmental problem. White pollution has become a common concern of the public.   According to a survey,in some areas  the ban on the use of plastic bags are not very successful,so white pollution continues.(开头写的太罗嗦,其实就简单的说白色污染再继续,所以写信要给建议)

In my humble opinion,you would be wise to take the following actions. The first action is that,your newspaper would strengthen to report the problem about the bad of plastic bags. The second  action is that ,your newspaper should persuade people not to use plastic bags. The last action is that your newspaper should allow the Government to formulate some policies to ban on the use of plastic bags. (这个中间段落结构上虽然清晰,但是结构句式却乏善可陈,没有任何句式的变化,唯一的优点就是在词汇上,就是我紫色画出来的部分)

I hope you will find these proposals useful,and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.

Yours sincerely
Li Ming

2008年考研小作文试题

51. Directions:

You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob,your landlord there. Write him a letter to

1)make an apology,and
2)suggest a solution.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)

参考范文

Dear Bob,

I am writing to express my apology to you.

Several days ago,I borrowed your music CD when I lived in your house. Unfortunately,after I came back from Canada,I found it in my luggage. I was in such a hurry that I forgot to return it to you. I will send it to you by post or express as soon as possible. If necessary,I will compensate for any troubles it may cause.(这个部分写的实在是没什么亮点,就是比较准确,没有错误,如果按湘湘教大家的方式我可以写成, Firstly,the reason why i took away your beloved cd player  and found it in my luggage is that i forgot to return it to you when i was leaving. And moreover,i am sure  the terrible effect,namely the great inconvenience might be that you fail to listen to your favourite songs when you wnat. Lastly,I am confident that i will never make the same mistakes by avoiding my carelessness and irresponsiblity and try to return this cd play to you as soon as possibe by means of EMS.

Once again,I feel so sorry for any inconvenience caused. Please accept my apology.

Sincerely yours,
Liming

2007年考研真题 小作文

51.Directions

Write a letter to you university library,making suggestions for improving its service.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m a student in the university and a loyal reader of this library. I’m writing to tell some of my ideas,which I hope to be helpful for you. (第一段写的还不错,而且加入了身份的介绍,同时写出了题目要求---建议,且带有定语从句)

I notice that many magazines in our library are out of date(过期,湘湘上课讲过的). It would be beneficial to us students if they could be updated in time. And I suggest introducing some new journals so as to bring new fresh air to the library. Furthermore(逻辑连贯),since we have a huge number of books,it is not easy to find the right one easily. However,if we can introduce some new searching means(引进新的搜索方式,比较好的思路, 如果按湘湘讲的写可以说书太多找起来不方便,带来的坏影响就是太浪费时间),such as implementing new information management system that would be useful. (他没有写服务,其实就写了两点建议)

Thank you for taking time reading this letter and I’m looking forward to seeing some new changes soon. (模板语言)

Sincerely Yours,
Li Ming

2006年考研小作文

51.Directions

You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area. Write a letter to the department concerned,asking them to help find a candidate

You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.

Write your letter in no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)

Dear Sir or Madam,

As a college student who is studying and living in a good environment,I wish to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial assistance to a child in a remote area. Having conceived such a plan for a long time,I write this letter to request your help to recommend a proper candidate. (开头太长,不过语言很好,而且有身份介绍,同时说出了很清晰的目的,但是不建议基础不好的同学模仿)

I wonder if it is convenient for you if three things concerning the child are taken into consideration. First,the child should come from Gansu Province,for I intend to help a child from my hometown. Second,it will be better if the child is a primary school student. I hope I will help him/her from the very beginning. In addition,he/she must be willing to return to his hometown to help built it after graduation from university.(注意看其中的内容,词汇没有任何特殊之处,基本全部是初高中词汇,就是搭配的比较好,且没有任何的错误)

My plan will be carried out as follows. On one hand,I will remit at least 2,000 Yuan in cash every year until he/she finishes his/her education before entering college. On the other hand,I decide to teach the child一 math and English in person during my summer vacation,which will surely be more beneficial to the child. (这个段落作者依然是在使用自己最会用的句式结构,了不起用了湘湘教的定语从句,大家无论如何要尽量使用定语从句哦!!!!而词汇他只用了几个他会的难词,所以大家记得,句式简单词汇难,词汇简单句式难是你可以二选一的方式,如果做不到,那就保证少出错,哪怕简单.)

Your prompt help would be highly appreciated. And I am looking forward to your reply very soon.(模板!!)

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

2005年考研小作文题目

51.Directions:

Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions,But n5ow you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss,Mr. Wang,telling him your decision,stating your reason (s),and making an apology.

Write your letter with no less than 100 words. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
You do not need to write the address. (10 points)

Dear Mr. Wang,

First of all,please allow me to express my deep sorry to you for my resignation(目的词,讲过的). I do know that this will bring about much trouble to you so that I write to you for my explanation.

I decided to quit for some reasons as follows.(理由) To begin with,the job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions is not suitable to me. What’s more,I am preparing for another degree and I prefer to further my study. Again,I apologize for my resignation to you! (这个范文的中间段写的之烂我都不想评价了,没什么内容,当然它具备唯一一个它具备的优点,那就是没出错....不用理它的内容,用湘湘上课教的思维和内容去写会好很多哦.)

I am looking forward to your early reply. (模板太烂!!!!我上课会给大家更好的句式比如说 i will be right here to wait for your early approval and once agian feel deeply sorry for the inconvenience my resignation has cause to you.

Sincerely yours,
Li Ming [实习编辑:张露]

    本文选自新东方周湘的博客,博客链接地址http://xiangxiangzhou.blog.sohu.com/115880141.html


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