第一节 短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语老师要求同桌之间修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从见11处起)不计分。
My father's friend Henry used to be a teacher at a
medical school and he was very strict to his students. The students were afraid
of him though he was seldom pleased with the answers they gave. Once
a student seated before him, and Henry required him to describing a
certain illness, his description of which turned out to be OK. Then Henry asked
about the cure for the illness, but the student gave the right answer. “How
much will you give the patient? ""A full spoor’s!" Suddenly the
student realizes that there was anything wrong. He said anxiously,"I've
made the mistake:a full spoon is too many, and he can take only
five drops." "It's too late;your patient has been
died," Henry said coldly.
【答案解析】
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student
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was
anything wrong.
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been died,"
Henry said coldly.
去掉
【分析】
本文是一篇记叙文,讲述了爸爸的朋友亨利曾经是一名医学老师,他对学生的要求非常严格,本二你就列举了一个他严格要求学生的例子。
【详解】
第一处:考查固定搭配。句意:他对学生要求非常严格。be strict with表示“对……严格要求”,故to改为with。
第二处:考查连词。句意:学生们都怕他,因为他对他们的回答很少满意。此处表示因果而非让步关系,故though改为because。
第三处:考查时态和固定搭配。句意:有一次,一名学生坐在他前面。be seated表示“坐下”,Once表明应该用一般过去时,故student后加was。
第四处:考查非谓语动词。句意:亨利要求他描述一种疾病。require sb to do表示“要求某人做某事”,故describing改为describe。
第五处:考查连词。句意:然后亨利问了关于这种疾病的治疗方法,学生给出了正确的答案。此处表示顺承而非转折关系,故but改为and。
第六处:考查时态。句意:突然,学生意识到有什么不对。事情发生在过去,应该用一般过去时,故realizes改为realized。
第七处:考查代词。句意参考上题解析,学生意识到有不对的地方,故anything改为something。
第八处:考查冠词。句意:我犯了一个错误。此处泛指一个错误,故the改为a。
第九处:考查too much和too many的区别。句意:一满勺的量太多了。根据前面的How much 可知,此处表示不可数名词,too much修饰不可数名词,too many修饰可数名词,故many改为much。
第十处:考查语态。句意:太迟了,病人已经死了。此处强调“死亡”这个动作刚刚发生,patient 与die之间是主动关系,不用被动语态,故has后been去掉。
【点睛】
本篇改错的第十处很有难度,注意have died与have been dead的区别,have died强调“死亡”这个动作刚刚发生,have been dead强调陈述事实,此处强调“死亡”这个动作已经发生或刚刚发生,应该用have died。
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